eart of the Sun Warrior was a major disappointment for me. I thoroughly enjoyed the first book in the duology, Daughter of the Moon Goddess,
but this follow up book was a chore to finish. It literally took me months to slog through; I kept setting it down when a plot point annoyed me and picking up different books that looked
more interesting. Finally I forced myself to read to the end so that I wouldn't have repeat the cycle of checking it out of the library and then keep renewing it. The best thing about
Heart of the Sun Warrior is that it features another beautiful eye-catching cover.
Several plot points truly frustrated me, I slammed the book in disgust and set it aside. I will explain in the spoiler section, but don't read that section unless
you have already read this book.
Heart of the Sun Warrior is a romance. The heroine, Xingyin, is now a powerful archer in the Celestial Army with a magic bow. Two princes are both madly
in love with her: Liwei is the good prince, full of light, understanding, courage and every other positive adjective you can think of. Liwei is the heir to the Celestial Throne, he is the
most eligible bachelor in the heavens, and Xingyin loves him completely. But also competing for her hand is Wenzhi, the dark prince, second in line to the throne of the Demon Kingdom. In
the first book, Daughter of the Moon Goddess, Wenzhi betrayed Xingyin and she cannot forgive him, no matter how much Wenzhi now professes how he has changed.
The plot has Xingyin completing various quests or completing rescues. Retrieve this artifact, find that treasure. In these endeavors, Wenzhi and Liwei both aid
her as best they can. For whatever reasons, these tasks the Xingyin must overcome seemed like deliberate obstacles Tan invented just to find a reason for Xingyin to be thrust into dangerous conflict and have Wenzhi
and/or Liwei come to her aid. I did not enjoy how powerful Xingyin has become in this novel compared to Daughter of the Moon Goddess. She can shoot her magic bow, she can make magic shields. Heal people. Hurl blasts of wind against of her opponents.
When she fights the immortal soldiers of the Celestial Army, they seem as threatening as the armored storm-troopers in the Star Wars movies; those bumbling stooges get mowed by the hundred despite their
armor, and they never seem to be able to inflict any harm on the Jedi heroes.
Because it took me so long to read Heart of the Sun Warrior, I had time to realize several troubling issues. The Celestial Emperor and Empress have been on their
throne for a thousand years (or has it been 10,000 years?). But their only offspring is Liwei, and he is only in his early twenties? Why doesn't he have dozens of siblings? Indeed, given that
the inhabitants of the Celestial Kingdom are immortal, why isn't it overrun with people? Is the murder rate extraordinarily high? (Immortals can be killed, being immortal apparently means you don't age once you reach your prime.) Tan never addresses this issue.
I don't know if I would read another book by Tan. Daughter of the Moon was great, and Heart of the Sun Warrior was a big letdown.
*** Warning - Spoilers below ***
*** Do NOT Read below if you haven't finished the book! ***
Liwei is imprisoned by the evil Wugang, and he is likely to be murdered in captivity. Xingyin and the Celestial Empress (Liwei's mother) know he must be rescued and so they must work together to save him,
but the Empress hates Xingyin even though Liwei loves her (apparently the hatred is because Xingyin lacks royal blood) and wishes her son would spurn Xingyin. Therefore, in order to aid Liwei's escape, the evil Empress extracts from Xingyin a
promise that if she helps Liwei's escape, then Xingyin must halt all romantic interaction with her son. After the Liwei's rescue, he doesn't understand why Xingyin is so cold to him. Xingyin of course still
loves him, but she made that promise.... Why doesn't Xingyin just explain to Liwei that in the presence of his mother that they must appear disinterested in each other?
The King of Demonland has a powerful magic spell that might allow our heroes to stop Wugang's evil plot. But in exchange for this spell-scroll, the King insists that Xingyin must
marry Prince Wenzhi, even though the King has never met her (and even though Xingyin doesn't have royal blood!). Oh the angst! Forced to marry the dark prince in order to have a chance to save the Celestial Kingdom!
Why does Wenzhi's evil brother decided to kill the King at the marriage ceremony? Perhaps committing regicide in front of the entire assembled court of the Demons is not a good plan?
What is the worst plot twist an author can write? "It was all a dream!" What plot twist is just as awful? Bringing back a character from the dead! The dead character isn't merely presumed
dead (ie: lost in an explosion that no one could have survived, even though no body was found). No - in Heart of the Sun Warrior, the dead character is a non-breathing, zero pulse corpse. There is no doubt that Wenzhi has expired. Oh!!!
Wenzhi died for Xingyin - she decides she actually loved him and not Liwei after all. How romantic of Wenzhi to die saving her! Oh the angst! Wait... Wenzhi is alive again? Booo! Booo! Boooooo!!! Please Sue Lynn Tan,
reconsider your plotting for your next novel. Thank goodness this surprise "plot twist" happened near the end of the novel, because I could not read much further.